All Comments on 'Office Talk'

Great beginning.....please continue!

So well written and detailed. Like a page from any man's fantasies. If I read this at my desk, I'd need a few moments to get up.

I was really hoping that this scenario would end up as a fantasy he was having at his desk so as to prolong the tension and build up to the actual event. Otherwise I really enjoyed it, especially the following line that really showcases the rhythm of the moment: Never did he think a moment like this would happen. To him. With her. In her. Devouring her.

Thank you for the feedback so far everybody!