All Comments on 'Office Vacation Ch. 03'

... After going back and reading the first two. Overall, I am enjoying the story. There are still a few grammar and language errors but solid effort. Summer has me intrigued as does Dee. Waiting for 4.

I'd like more.

I agree with the others... I can overlook any grammar errors when the story is good... and this story is very good. Dee and Summer (Wynter) are intriguing and I'd like to see where this story might go. You can keep the anal and the dumbshit girl, but the others are fun to read about. Keep it up!

An END to a great story?

Yes, then there are other stories to be written!