All Comments on 'Oh Baby! What a Sitter! Pt. 02'

Another great installment to a well done story. Really enjoying this storyline and the sensational sex between these two. Keep up the great work!

One more ch. would do nicely.Thank you for the past read.Excellently Done.

Yes, please, another chapter! This is a wonderful love/lust story, and you are presenting it in a terrific way. Your characters are realistic and believable. Thanks for sharing, and I'll be watching eagerly for part three!

.....for another great shower tit-fuck scene. It was great when Becca did it for her man, and Kelly seemed to make Todd very happy that way. Keep writing!

...three great chapters.\!!

Great follow up and i liked the end of the chapter.

As far as I'm concerned, you don't have to stop at three if you can come up with a way to carry on further with these characters. Maybe even going on after turning the sitter into a Mrs...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I love this series! Hopefully we'll get to see the sitter become a mommy herself.

So glad you wrote this amazing story

Love the series

There are many sexy possibilities between these two, I say experiment with their energy. This couple have no boundaries! Keep going.

Enjoying the story. Please do part 3 soon.

Todd's inner struggle as a widower and single father really tugs at the heart strings. Reading about this turn of events and his newfound happiness is uplifting. The compatibility between Todd and Kelly, reunited after so many years, is really something special. As for the sexual chemistry between the two, well that's just fucking hot!

It has a LEAST one more chapter, maybe two depending on how you handle it. Well written and presented........

No 19 year old woman or 26 year old man would watch Baretta. Even if they did catch reruns with their parents, it still wouldn't be something they referenced casually.

Can't wait to read what happens next

at least another chapter, but preferably more.

Enjoyed and look forward to seeing what happens next

Definitely calls for an additional story! They both deserve a happy ending.

I really enjoyed their relationship. I hope to see more of their life together. And maybe a twist ending after they are married and everything and he learns their meeting wasn't an accident. That maybe she's been stalking him from as soon as she graduated.. Or you could take it even darker and find she had a connection to the car accident that coincidentally only struck his wife's side of the car.

Don't do the car accident thing that is so mean and sad this should be a happy ending... that could ruin the relationship if she purposely killed amy

very good story

regrettably, good stories make an old man like me feel even more lonely

maybe don't let it end with the next chapter??? Very realistic reading..... love it!!

Loved this chapter. I do hope it continues. I love the emotional context. Realistic and sexy. Well written. Thank you!

I like the shopping trip Monique couldn't be more fun. I know its part of the story but that's one cheap ass company, TWO dudes to a room. I'm glad we manned up and go home on the weekend. Something I never had to do.

This is, by far, one of the best stories I have ever read!! I wouldn't mind seeing MANY more chapters to this story!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!

This is turning into a really fine series and I loved the mobile app!

My kind of story, such a real "pleasure" to read.

Personally, I hope it has many more chapters to explore. Very well written

Perhaps just one more, when his time in Toledo is over.

An eventful homecoming their first night together, perhaps leading up to wedding plans. (they damned well better get married!)

This story could have ended as it is, except for the return to work away.

One of the better stories I've read here on Literotica.

5 Stars, and thank you for writing it.

... I now see there are more chapters!

There is nothing but the physical. Sure the author goes into a slight recollection of events with what he had in his wife, but nobody has called the "parents" (i.e. guess who I ran into), With their having "been SO CLOSE..." and all, you wonder why the families fell apart? Besides, there is no talking. What is she "doing" in her life? Doeasn't she have a job? How did she pay to live with those "roommates"?

Too much has been overlooked in developing this story. There is lots of decent "amazing fuck scenes" with big tits and monster cocks - in the bed, the pool and the shower. They don't talk when driving, and when they do talk it seems everything is sexually oriented.

Pretty lame when you really look beyond the continuous fuck scenes, unfortunately it doesn't reflect real life, which is what makes a good story. Fantasy ended a chapter ago, if you want to write a longer story you NEED development!

Smokepole

My husband and I use the "WeVibe" toy together while he's at work and I'm home. I can't believe you used it in this story, so good! I'm hoping that there's some ass play in the chapter yet to come.

Beautifully written. Get a few more chapters out! Wedding and pregnancy!!!

Enough said.

Has no business being in charge of HR

He is the kind of person an HR professional would protect the company against.

Ok, this is an excellent start; now it needs at least some interesting incident to fill it out.

... and though I've never worked in an office environment myself, I'd say rightbank is correct, Tony would be gone in a heartbeat.

Just keep in mind, rb, it's a work of fiction.

And it's even better than the first two times I've read it!

I just have one major complaint, I can't vote on it more than once!

I'd give it another 5 Stars.

On to the next installment!

I agree with smokepole. Does the 19yr. old go to school or have a job? Does she have any goals beyond playing wife & mommy? Where are her friends & family?

Another 5...!

easy to see why he fell for her so quick...

have to agree with rightbank re his pig roommate, even if it is 3 yrs later now

and admit I wondered what her deal is...didn't seem like trust fund babe-but didn't dwell on it, just like I don't wonder what kind of b.c she's using-this is all make-believe...hot slippery fun....

More please I want to read the wedding any honey moon

I'm truly enjoying your funny and erotic romance series. I'm expecting a happily ever after for them. 5 stars

It's fiction. It's erotica. Enjoy it. I have. 5 stars.

THIS IS GOOD!

Very very hot great writing !!!

comment is really about part 1. what company would send a singe dad with a 2 year old away for 6 weeks without a better arrangement, support system ????

Wonderful. Kelly needs to have a big belly with 2 siblings for their daughter Lynn. The names, MRS. and MOMMY would fit very well!

Absolutely love the domestic aspects to the female character, especially the ones related to her loving his child. Such a turn on for a father to see his children cared for and accepted.

What a great love story. 5/5

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I never believed in Fairy Tales But I can Believe in This One.

It has Warmth & Most of the Kinks I Love!!!!

Oh man, your storyfails at the outset. No company ever requires two employees to share a hotel room. Much less a plant manager and a head of HR. Those guys in HR dont like to have anyone else in the hotel either. And who the hell ever heard of a 26 year old plant manager. Most companies don't make anyone a plant manager until they are 46 years old. MM

OMGOMGOMFG!!! Such a loverly tale. I'm enthralled. What a heavenly story. As a man in love with his Goddess, I can say that it just keeps getting better!

Finally!! Such fine tits so deserve a good fucking and blasting! I thought you'd never get there. I really need a babysitter like her, to sit on my big baby. May just have to try out one of those pocket pussies. Lord knows I'm hard enough now. Slammin the ham.here. 🍆💦💦💦👌