All Comments on 'Oh Baby! What a Sitter! Pt. 04'

Nice story! As far as your dilemma I'd suggest Samantha and Alex :D Probably a favorite of mine out of all your series.

I agree you need to do more with Sam and Alex i have missed seeing your postings.I realize that we all lead busy lives and you are one of my favorite authors on this site.But please give us more of your series stories.

By the way 5 stars !

Loved this chapter! In my opinion, might I suggest continuing with Steve and Erica?

I really love this serie's and i am happy you are continuering it

This series just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. How did the coin flip turn out?

this is a great story and thanks for sharing. keep it up you have a fan here

Hopefully you can continue this storyline. I say Dan and Karen need your attention next. Or, even better, continue Love Me Love my Dogs. I want to see how they entrap the slimey professor and then get married. Keep up the great writing!

Please make another chapter soon, I am in love with the characters

Definitely need another chapter or two or three to complete this story.

Love this series!! I agree, keep adding more chapters-maybe in Kelly's POV??

Excellent story well written. Not just constant sex. Well done, looking forward to more of Todd and Kelly's life.

This story just keeps getting better!!!! I love that Kelly let him fuck her in the ass!!! Maybe bringing her roommate from school over for a threesome would be a good way to keep broadening her sexual horizons. Whatever way you choose to go, I'm sure it will be as great as the previous chapters!

Do like the Scuba part and getting in to the nice tight wetsuit. Also the exploration of anal pleasures is very good. Looking forward to read more!

this one has gotten even better as it went along...

And considering it started out as at least a high 4, that doesn't leave much room for rating improvement...

Love to read more about them...

I don't think i ever want this story to end

I really want more from these two. Excellent writing, excellent sparks, and I know the ending is perfect, but STILL want to see more of these two!

Liked this one. The sex was good but flowed from the story.

Although technically this story is complete as far as it goes perhaps another episode after they arrive home? After all she has two years of college to get through. Perhaps a new baby? Who knows?

great series and tons of room for the story to continue for some time.

this series is getting even better. And I cast my vote for David Monica and Karen

Please continue the story. I don't want it to end

this story is fantastic as is don't mess it up going ahead with it

Very cute, sexy story!

Their "Neighborly" series sounds more like a good match in my opinion. I most often prefer an even number set. Watching more is too distracting, even if it's FMF. At times there's bound to be an odd 'man' out. Not that I wouldn't enjoy watching two loving women to rejuvenate body parts.

... that this one is done.

But what a ride it has been!

It's perfect just the way it is, and anything more can just be left to our imaginations.

Overall, very well written, both in their relationship and the passion of it.

Great read, and thank you for it!

5 Stars again.

Want more chapters.

I've read hundreds and hundreds of stories here and without a doubt this is my favorite. It was extremely well written, believable, engaging, sexy, and it was a lot of fun to read. Well done!

I want more!

If the choices are for their children's names, I vote for Dan and Karen. :)

Well thought, excellent plot, excellent language, will make an excellent novel. Thank you

Enjoyed this chapter very much! Certainly this could be an ending chapter, all loose ends finished with a happy ending. Would enjoy reading another chapter if you have more ideas for it, but satisfied with the current ending! Well Done!

Wonderful ending!!! More one of these days please!!!

Thank you so much for this story. It is every mans dream to have a woman to love and cherish and also have incredible sex. I hope it continues especially with them having a family together. I remember a part in the story where he was looking at her breasts and wondering what it would be like to drink the milk from them. I hope this is included in future stories.

What a beaut story. This had it all, well apart from a threesome but I was glad you didn't go there as it would now be too soon in the romance. Well done and congratulations. I will definitely be reading more of your stories.

For writing.

So it is erotica, but it is also a Love Story, and done well. My sincere thanks.

As to more? I think there has been enough talk about it for a baby to be added into the picture and if you want to go anywhere else with them it is up to you. I'm happy as it is.

Love this. Nice work.

I couldn't stop reading

Great story and very enjoyable read. Will be happily looking forward to more if that is to be the case.

great story I like how it he found love again it was nice and slow not rushed. I liked when his daughter called Kelly mommy

great story! more please

I find too many submissions far from realistic but I was truly captured by the speed or rather the sensuous building of the characters and the story. Please continue.......

Can’t wait to see where the story continues to take these two, and little Lynn :) thanks for bringing an epic story to life! I, for one, say forget the haters!! You have some serious skills with words.

I cast my vote for more Todd and Kelly. Great story well paced and realistic. Just don't wait too long.

detroitdave

I’m thinking more please

One hell of a story, I enjoyed ever single part.

Enjoying this! More please!

I know it has been years, but we need more of them!

Great story, would love to see where marriage and pregnancy come in.

What happened to this Series?

I really liked it :/

Please continue the story, but with a little less oral. What happened starting with then walking up to the restaurant?

Of the many stories on Lit, this is one of my absolute favorites. 5 stars all the way!!

Way too abrupt an ending after that build up. We want our additional chapters about their story and now marriage

Really enjoyed this story and would love to read more.

I throughly enjoyed this story. If you add more to it il read it. If not I've enjoyed what I've read. Thank you

Really good.

Only two small complaints, physically perfect specimens.... a little trite, but she does sound delicious.

Also, the kiddo disappeared in this last act, we at least needed a goodbye, who was watching the kid, why the kid could not go...

I usually do not award stars with these sort of problems, because a 5 is too generous, but I do not want to drag you down with a 4.

5 for you, though....

I enjoyed every bit of this Romantic, Erotic, and Funny series. I'm a bit sad that there was no chapter 5. I would have liked to have read about them arriving home and Kelly throwing away her birth control pills, becoming pregnant, and eventually graduating from university. This was a great feel-good narrative. Thank you for sharing. 5 stars, of course.

Monotonous

Excellent series. Absolute Genius. However...I would have liked to see the repercussion to the QB once the couch saw the video. I Know, I Know. Insignificant. It wasn't needed.

Hope you come back at some point to continue this story

WONDERFUL! GREAT ROMANCE! HAPPINESS FOR THEM BOTH!

Wonderful story. Lynn finally has a mommy, when she carries her daughter on her hip, with her brother and sister in mommy's tummy. If you think Lynn is not her daughter, try to harm that baby. Mama bear will more than protect HER CUB. In later years, Lynn will say, Oh mom, and she'll say, that's right my beautiful loving daughter. Please write more of this story

WONDERFUL STORY! Please write more of this wonderful series! 10 stars aren't enough...

awesome cant wait for more

Was sad there wasn't more chapters

It was great but she needs to get pregnante on her honeymoon!!!

If all the unecessary repitition was remove this story coul have been told in two chapters maximum.

Verry Romantique und Sweet Series!

11/10 Gis!!!!!

What were the marshal arts classes for?

What about Lynn's other grandparents?

Best I’ve read

Excellent series but it really needed an additional chapter or two to really end it properly and show them with more children and Todd and Kelly's life with her in college and the challenges they would face. Well Done 5/5

More more more. I love this story. One of the best ones I e read and I've read a lot!!!

You said there will be more chapters. If you are still alive, can we get at least one more chapter please.

That was a spectacular story. You are a gifted writer. Well done. The best part, for me was all the smashing. Nicely done. Keep up the good work

What a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Thank you for sharing,

Milton?! What a delightfully unexpected reference!

Would love to see another part in the future

Just wondering when the baby is coming

Great story I really need more

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 EXCELLENT.

Congratulations on a truly erotic romantic story, with good characterisation and descriptions in the build-up, a climactic scene to close, unfortunately no fifth chapter and no sibling for the youngster.

Excellent!!! my 2nd read and still looking for more.... PLEASE??

Loved this SO much

Next chapter please

Pretty monotonous toward the end.

I think this was a good place to end the story of Mr & Mrs Stewart. The lean of their lives was going to be more sex and some kids but I would have enjoyed a chapter with Kelly using her newfound skill to end the career of the jock at college when his circle jerk friends talked him into trying for a little revenge. Well hells bells, I just wrote that chapter so on to a new adventure.

How come only the two of them were at the wedding.?What about their parents and Lyn as a flower girl.Probably overlooked as the author spent his time on unnecessary sex scenes.

I was disappointed of how uninvolved the guy was as a father throughout the entire story for the sake of the endless and redundant sex part of the story! His parents and new girlfriend were more involved with his daughter than he was. No self-respecting single dad would abandon a two-year old daughter for six weeks, and leave her with a new girlfriend. His own daughter wasn't even part of the wedding to his new wife and her new "mother!?!" The guy was a selfish underdeveloped creep with nothing but big tits on the brain! I love being intimate with a woman, but I'm also a single dad!

Well I guess this is where the story ends. Too bad. Had at least another chapter's worth of stuff to cover but I guess it's good enough. It's obvious where it's going anyway.

Excellent story, let them live in peace.

Disappointed in not having at least his daughter if not both sets of parents at the wedding. As you mentioned after that there was more to come of these two. Hopefully we will see that he is a good father and that they continue to expand the family. But seeing how long ago it was written I'm not going to hold my breath.

Great story. Easy read. Should have both sets of parents as well as their daughter

Mazel tov!

Just keeps getting better! I love this story!