All Comments on 'Oh, Granny Ch. 04 - Midnight Cravings'

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old_n_fat_is_beautifulold_n_fat_is_beautifulover 1 year ago

It's good enough to catch and hold my attention so far, but - at least to my mind - there's not (yet) an easy flow in the development. Also, the psychology could be better developed. Still, keep at it, it's better than anything I've ever written so far.

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