All Comments on 'Oh, Jan!'

by JerryDancer

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Omegaman60Omegaman603 months ago

There was a lot of fluff on page one before things got erotic. It was quite a well written story. Thanks for sharing

Bartleby73Bartleby733 months ago

very well written story, the long winded intro made it believable. the sex scene was very hot.

gooner9000gooner90004 days ago

Ok I get it! She doesn't drink good beer! God damn bro.

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All my life I have wanted to write, but I put my writing on the back-burner while I focused on making a living and raising a family. Recently, I have returned to creating fiction. I write F&SF, fan fiction and now --here -- more risque stories.