All Comments on 'Oh Katie!'

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Jim44444Jim44444almost 11 years ago
Good start.

Well written but feels incomplete. This seems to be just the beginning of a story.

Thanks for writing.

KevinandNinaKevinandNinaalmost 7 years ago
Well written but where's the rest?

What happened next?

How did the cops know about her?

Did she ever see or hear from the married man again?

Was he a regular lover or just a random guy she met?

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