All Comments on 'Oh My Family Ch. 01'

by gen_man69

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LeapingdeerLeapingdeerover 13 years ago

Cant wait to get to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
interesting

would like more and where was her mom coming form that nigh in her robe

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
different than most

most stories are so predictable, love the way this spun out and where it may go, a little to 'aloof' afterwords between dad and daughter, but still a hot story. can't wait till mom smells pussy on dad's face that doesn't belong to aunt karen . . . . that would be interesting. keep it going and really like your approach.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Would love to read about her joining mom, dad and aunt and taking it in the ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I would have liked the seduction to have been more developed; too quick.

There was very little build up between father and daughter. I would have enjoyed a more seductive development.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
i like it

well the last comment makes a point, i like the fact shes aggressive. i would love to see a broader story of how the threesome happend and how they make it a foursome. great story.

txcrackertxcrackerabout 11 years ago
Interesting

Not usually my taste but I enjoyed this one and will await the next

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

Awesome!! Hope she has some fun with her mum and aunt Karen!!!!!

dackjanielsdackjanielsabout 9 years ago

Good start, looking forward to the rest.

perejohn41perejohn415 months ago

A good starting point, can’t wait to read more.

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