All Comments on 'Oh Snap! Ch. 02'

Thank you for taking everyone's input and making this a really good story! It's really hot how you let her truly feel herself instead of just making her a zombie as you put it. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Thank you again!

You started on a good path with chapter 1 and followed up with an excellent second part. I really liked that the female kept her intelligence and didn't turn into some brainless sex craving bimbo, I hope you will continue on this path. Cause you have a good thing going here, you have set this up so either things go smoothly or your protagonist runs into some issues.

Keep up the good work on Chapter 3

Keep it up!!!!!!!!!

This is one of those rare stories where you read it and hope the next chapter drops real soon. There could be a dozen of them and I wouldn't mind. Excellent writing and character development, imo.

This chapter is great and I have a feeling the stories will just keep getting better!! Looking forward to the next chapter

Chapters 1&2 are great! You are developing a great story line. I’m looking forward to chapter 3 & many more!

Incredible story that just keeps getting better. You left it open for some great possibilities. I can’t wait to see where you take it.

cant wait to see where you take this story, looking forward to chapter 3

great work so far, looking forward to the next

Well Now we need to see what becomes of the Sorority. Does he take others as his Women/slaves. What of the men they have humiliated it would be fitting to send a Gift to those who left after the Humiliation.

Do you realise you have done something unique? No one has written a story where the captive villain becomes anything more than a toy to be used. The whole changing her into a perfect, useful human is completely new. Love it. Top work. Your chapters are way too short. What you've written so far is about half a chapter. Great work, thank you!😉🍺

I hope you’ll continue this one day. It’s a great start to a story.

I want another chapter!! Or three!