by magmaman
....thought this one even better.I really like when this author does first person narrative as the thought processes portrayed seem very realistic and the dialogue as well.Loved the line about google.Keep this going,it's not often on this site there are two characters that are likeable.Or sex acts that seem possible and not over the top.
Probably getting married ten days after meeting someone will give you an equal chance in the divorce lottery with those who spend three years in courtship! Lots of people and situations in this story.
This story about a married couple learning about each other and loving each other is clever and very entertaining!
This Marriage will continue for the next however many years. You know why? simple, they will be fucking and sucking any one that comes near them and live out the rest of their marriage as a male and female slut. But if that's what HDK and MAG want read about then that's up to them. I don't understand this 'sharing' or 'open' marriage thing. But that's just me.
"I sighed. Fucking Google, those assholes don't know anything about women." No one understands women....
I'm a bit disappointed there's no chapter 3, but then so many stories on this site are over developed. Some authors stretch their stories beyond credibility. This one left me hanging - a lot like real life! Anyway, full marks.
Fun read and needs to be continued. The story needs to continue with a more direct purpose in mind. Continue with the relationship with Martha or some other adventure that doesn't include humiliation of either spouse.
Prepare for the worst - it is coming and you have no clue how to deal with it - ROFL
what started as a bit of fun and she is definitely in control......the fact she flashed for the girl in the shoe store then wouldn't share with him just shows what a whore she is as she obviously wants to go fuck around with the girl.....this is heading rapidly down the shit pan and will end in tears......women are such fucking controlling slut whore skanks.....and only to be despised....
If there was anything like a story plot hidden somewhere in this one, I guess I missed it.