All Comments on 'Oil Can'

by TheeGoatPig

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PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Weird

I don't remember reading any of your other stories but this was a very sexy story although just a little weird, in a good way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Tragic

How tragic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fun!

I enjoyed this story tremendously. Well Done! Erotic and humorous. I loved it!

Tio_NarratoreTio_Narratoreabout 11 years ago
cute, a nice , light read

Cute little game, there, Thee, but when she posed and declared "Oil Can," I thought she was giving him directions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nioce one!

Very nicely put, if may say so.

Good writing, that.

73

HP

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good idea

It was certainly a creative idea. Not War and peace but fun to read!

TheeGoatPigTheeGoatPigover 10 years agoAuthor

This whole thing came to me from talking to myself while stopped at a traffic light when driving to work a few years ago, and I'm always surprised anyone likes it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

That's the dumbest, most unerotic thing I've ever read. "Member"? Sounds like something a 14-year old fanfiction writer says.

"When he thought her middle extremities had gotten enough"

You need to look up the definition of "Extremities."

56 repetitions of "Oil can" and I'm in a coma.

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