by Fillmore
Good story. Should be under Novels and Novellas by now, but hey, keep it where it is. Waiting for #26
Like all of the previous chapters, it was excellent. I did notice that the part with Rachel was very touching and I hope Eddy, Tammara and Rachel can be a family even if it is once a month on the weekend. Please make Tammara make Eddy forgive himself.
I really have to hand it to you! Every time I think about the way this story is going to play out, I am surprised by the twists that this is going through. I am surprised at the next chapter will bring. I thought that I could see what is going to happen, but I usually guess wrong.
Keep up the good work and write more chapters.
....or there isn't any justice on this site! I am so engrossed in this story I cannot comprehend how I will feel once it is over....PLEASE keep going!!!!
All the best for 2006 sweetie xxxxxxxxx
well written, exciting,sensual and geezes...just awesome stories i've read, it only gets better and better. Thank you for sharing with us and please please don't stop now, i will continue on with catching up but...i do pray you don't stop this story anytime soon, its just way too good for online...publish this somebody...you will make a fortune. Respectfully a newly aquired fan in Texas naynay
..., you need to go back and read. Everyone else calls her Tamara or a diminutive. She specifically asked Eddy to call her by her middle name.
VisualPerv
I have been working my way through this story, giving most Chapters five stars and none less than four. However, this installment has blown me away. If I could click seven stars, that is what I would have done. It is a beautiful piece of writing and takes the story to unanticipated depths. Eddy's interaction with Rachel had me leaking a tear and I am so looking forward to seeing how things work out with Nikki and the family. I like the way Nick's character is growing from an 'off the peg' stock gangster to a rounded person and (despite having minimal interest in gay stories as such) hope we will see more of him and his paramour, Randy.
Wow. I really like your story so far. The interaction between Rachel and her brother was one of the most beautiful scenes I ve ever come across. This series has been a work of art. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Yours,
SUSAN