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by olddave51

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy9 months ago

Very enjoyable!

5

des911des9119 months ago

Nice one. Thank you

BlueFox007BlueFox0079 months ago

That was pleasant. Thank you.

5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very sweet! 5 stars

lAnatomistelAnatomiste9 months ago

A pleasant story.

Some readers will complain that there was no plot, that everything went off too smoothly - especially with Anna. This is in "Romance", not LW, and sometimes people _are_ nice.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc9 months ago

Entertaining read. Left a lot out regarding the ex's on both sides and it was heavily driven by straight narrative. 3.7*

toniknighttoniknight9 months ago

Nice work, like the side development and detailing you got!

toniknighttoniknight9 months ago

Lovely work, great details and side building!

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Non-Drinker, Non-Smoker, Non-drug user At my age I have experienced a lot with love and intimacy. I plan to write about it. With more than two ex-wives and a few Girl Friends. Most of my stories have some truth to them. I tend to use some of the same behaviors, actions in my...