All Comments on 'Old Friends'

At first I was ensnared..... then I quit reading about have way through - the story fell apart - not enough detail - How did she go from being the laughing stock of the high school popular crowd to the object of lust and desire? Take a little most time with this - it could have been a good story.

Great story line, but I got lost as to who was talking. Please, in the future, use quotation marks. Thanks.