All Comments on 'Old Friends'

The story was good but needs some more details like for example what color shirt that he had on her she had on what color the pants or the skirts or what color underwear she had on or he had on that sort of thing... The details make the story even sexier but I still can't wait to see what happens

Great story wonderful writing please continue with this story

OK, cute story, worth several stars.

A couple things bother me. First, what guy doesn't keep a "Go" bag in his trunk? Parents are five hours away and when you get, "the call," you don't hesitate. Any good gentleman is prepared for an overnight excursion, even if it's only five minutes away!

The second point is after dinner, he's "still in his work clothes." Yeah, we know that. He left home without a GO bag, and has only been to the café. I'm not sure the decision to leave without a bag is foreshadowing the event in her home.

Otherewise, it's a good clean story.

Story is very similar to a real life situation to me many years ago ... right down to the couch scene!! Liked this very much ... "5"

Please do continue this story, although it could be left here, you have promised more and we will be waiting for it.

Great job, thanks,

Tanhors and family.