All Comments on 'Old Friends and New Mistakes'

I'm thinking there's going to be a second chapter, but it kinda depends how often we see each other :)

I loved the build up..explaining the friendship. Sometimes the best sex is between old friends. Thanks for the trip down memory lane.

I was left puzzled by thius tale. Were did these old ten years past lovers wind up going? She is married to some one else and he is hanging free. I am glad his team won the game but there are too many hanging ends. How did they get to share a trip, game and room?

A fair start for a 1st time writer