All Comments on 'Old Friends, New Flames Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Story

Keep up the good writing. If this is your first, you really have a natural talent! Thanks again

KayVampKayVampalmost 15 years ago
I want more!

It would be awesome to read about them sneaking around their parents and them falling in love. It would be great since their parents are so close :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

i loved how there was background and history, i would love to read about them falling in love and hooking up in her room where they use to play house!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I really really want more

It was just fantastic,, wud be great if dis continued,, dem fallin in love

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Omg

I have read many first time stories and honestly this is the best. I would love and appreciate if you did continue the story. The details are amazing! A good writer like you shouldn't leave us hanging, so do please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The story is not complete.

Write more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep Going.

Keep going, it is rare to read stories of this quality and believability which makes it all the more enjoyable.

A happy ending is also a bonus.and brings about a an ending which completes the story and does not leave the reader hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I agree.

Anonymous Is correct and I could not put it any better.

Congratulations and PLEASE keep writing.

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I like to explore more of the emotional side with my writings, as well as bring a sense of humor to writing erotic stories, because come on, sex (and foreplay) can be awkward right?

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