by heyyouitsme
Keep up the good writing. If this is your first, you really have a natural talent! Thanks again
It would be awesome to read about them sneaking around their parents and them falling in love. It would be great since their parents are so close :-)
i loved how there was background and history, i would love to read about them falling in love and hooking up in her room where they use to play house!
It was just fantastic,, wud be great if dis continued,, dem fallin in love
I have read many first time stories and honestly this is the best. I would love and appreciate if you did continue the story. The details are amazing! A good writer like you shouldn't leave us hanging, so do please continue.
Keep going, it is rare to read stories of this quality and believability which makes it all the more enjoyable.
A happy ending is also a bonus.and brings about a an ending which completes the story and does not leave the reader hanging.
Anonymous Is correct and I could not put it any better.
Congratulations and PLEASE keep writing.