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mitchawamitchawaover 4 years ago
Lucky

Some horny females get all the luck. A fifty-year-old-craftsman rescues her. You have a new, calming hook. The description of Jared's life and dwelling is clear. Spotting Trisha's car was a lucky happenstance. Their conversation and trip back to his lodge were well done. Trisha's transformation was a pleasant surprise. The sex scene was an excellent series of moves making the scene well above average. The ending was well stated, and her need for a coffee table was unexpected. However, Jared's agreement with a deposit was a near-perfect ending

Cracker270Cracker270over 4 years ago

Nice little story, well told as usual. If you don't know a lot about wood working you sure fooled me.

rayironyrayironyover 4 years ago
Yeah:

Just plain tasty..

Even if the transition between shivering lost waif and unleashed seductress was a bit hasty.

For those of us a-social crusties living isolated in the boonies with our art;

I do thank you.

Crusader235Crusader235over 4 years ago
Five

I gave you five stars, for the excellent story, and writing every old man's dream. Loved it!

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Very Entertaining Read****

Good storyline. The location description was great. Thanks for sharing.

RejectRealityRejectRealityover 4 years agoAuthor

What I know about woodworking comes entirely from the research rabbit-hole I tumbled down while researching wood turning for a ( as yet unwritten ) story. I'm subscribed to several wood turning and restoration channels, as well as a sawmilling one and two lock picking/sport channels, and watch several others when they pop up in my recommendations. Glad it comes across as reasonably authentic :)

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 4 years ago

Sweet, somebody has to luv us older guys!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I came so hard reading this!

I'm glad you are back! I missed your stories, your way to describe the sensations and actions always make me feel like it's happening to my body!

Also the Older studs you write are hot as sin!

Please keep more stories cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great read.

An enjoyable read with good base story, would love to see where this leads.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice Fantasy!

Hot little minxes always welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I really enjoyed this read! I'll be looking up your other stories next time I hop on the site. I've never left a comment before, or even a rating, but your writing and your little note at the end has inspired me to start.

PiscatorPiscatorabout 4 years ago

There's a lot to be said about old growth wood.

auhunter04auhunter04about 2 years ago

I would like to find a place like his.

but no expectations of visitors

that is why I want to be out there

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a lovely, well-written story, with great characters and a wonderful romantic atmosphere, but like too many of the author's other stories, it is much too short.

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