All Comments on 'Old World Magic Ch. 04'

it!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more.

In the very good story,

"he's discreet", not "he's discrete"

since he's not one-dimensional or just a little particle. He's discreet if he maintains discretion.

Thanks for your fine series!

" ...I could swear I saw her lying down on the carpet in the middle of the room.... right after fucking me.... and why was she pulling her knees up to her breasts and hugging them there?"

In nine months: "Surprise! You're a Daddy!" Sounds to me that Reina ain't waiting to collect on the debt Micheal owes her?

...too many writers and editors trust the reliability of word processing software that auto-replaces words.

Unfortunately, those programmers coding the software are required to be certifiably illiterate.

Spellcheck and similar functions are homophone-phobic. Though sometimes the wrong word in the right context can be very punny!