All Comments on 'Old Wounds Ch. 02'

Well, he's starting to wake up! Great story line. Can't hardly wait for the next installment. 5 🌟

this was nice part, i hope there is going to be more

I am greatly enjoying your work

I'm digging it, but my god is he dumb. Hopefully he starts to put things together soon.

What a cliff hanger. He gets kissed and we have to wait for the next chapter. :-)

THANKS

Love it. Keep story line, it works.

Another 5/5, this tale is brilliant well written with an engaging storyline/plot.

I’m really enjoying it.

When will our hero wake up to Kates feelings?????

What a thick head.

Roll on the next chapter.....

Good story!

5

Maybe I'm wrong or got lost in the timeline but I thought in the first story the father died yet there he was at the mud drag. Not sure if I'm enjoying it or just curious to see how it ends.

Keep it going and post the next chapter soon.

Snake doesn't seem to have any idea of Katie's feelings for him, but that may not be too surprising given their history of growing up together as friends. It's not east to push through that boundary when you're not certain of the results. But he does have a problem in not communicating with friends.

Well written and quite detailed. Looking forward to the conclusion.

AND anxious to see how it proceeds. Really good story. Thanks for sharing.

Hopefully, she will tell him he has someone to come back to...someone who cares!

Hope to be able to read the next chapter soon.

This story has a nice start with a slow build of characters to give the story depth. Now just need to continue with it to the end. Thanks for giving your time and sharing your considerable talent.

Great story! Can’t wait for your next instalment.

Just read your story and hope you haven't given up on it. I'm not going to tell you how to write your thoughts, I will simply say that I have known a number of people from different parts of the country with different ways of talking and accents, but the one thing that I have noticed is they don't have an accent when they write. Just thought I would throw that in for what it's worth.

BlueBran - do your readers right - finish the stories you've started. Don't leave us hanging.

Please finish!!!

Great story, When will write the next chapter(s)?

Hey BlueBran! Kindly post the next chapter please!

I.W

Read on the forum somewhere that BlueBran passed away due to the freaking virus... RIP mate! You will be forever missed! You were one hell of a romance writer!

Regards,

Jasper.

Will there be more

Someone please tell me that anon Jasper is a freaking liar!

Another un-finished story. It was good while it lasted.

I truly hope “Jasper” is mistaken about BlueBran passing away.

Poorly written story with an asshole MC and not much of a plot

How fucking stupid is this guy? Both Alison and Katie draw him pictures and he still adds 2 + 2 and comes up with 7. Not sure how he learned to tie his shoes if he's that dumb! I see Chap 3 was a Looooong time coming - I hope he's gotten his head out of his ass, but the title of 3 doesn't leave a lot of room for hope?

Just getting caught up in the series. Great narrative and plot progression except too much time is spent on detailed life in Michigan. It's fine to go through what life is like there, but only as it pertains to plot progression. Like the mid drags saw he and Katie drawing together, so that one is good. Sitting around with friends drinking, boring and unnecessary. 4*

I have to agree with LitCrit's comments. Matt is Totally Clueless. He's so deeply invested in his narcissistic self that nobody else matters to him. Hell, he ghosted every last one of his closest friends and has no conscience or regrets. 3/5

Matt is a stupid asshole who doesn’t seem to understand how life works.

I know that the characters depicted are young, but they seem remarkably shallow (and dumb): beer, smokes and stupid recreational activities dominate their lifestyles. Not a word is mentioned about how they earn their livings or other less stupid activities. Too much detail devoted to getting truck ready for the mud run. These people seem like unrepentant insensitive antediluvian troglodytes. It solidifies my impression that north of Mackinac City that the population is remarkably inbred—think Pitcairn Island.

Sorry can't finish this garbage. Keep going back. Was expecting forward movement.

So far it’s a nice buildup, yet it is also kinda dragging its feet. Matt is kinda lost in the world of his friends and family. His dad is the only one that understands him since he was there. Yet it’s almost like he is pushing his mom away or keeping her in the dark. 3/5