All Comments on 'Older Sister Shares Sleeping Bag'

I liked this story a lot. 5 stars.

This story has potential to be a much longer series.

So very sweet!

Great story. Hope you continue it. Cheers. Frankie

Very nice sexy tale. More please.

For your next chapter did Mom catch onto what was going on with her son and daughter and decided to get in on the fun with her son???????????

Please let me know if you do write this. At rjb49@bellsouth.net

more!

Very nice. Story needs finishing though.

Fabulous 😍 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Good story. Sounds like the start of a long, loving, incestuous life for brother & sister becoming an exclusive couple. Maybe mom & dad heard the seeding & openly encourage more seedings over the camping trip. Could there even be a chance mom & dad join in on the seedings with possible younglings in the future? Keep the going, Please. 5☆

Such a sweet story!

Five point 0 stars, on the dot. 👏👏

Fantastic. Five stars!! Can't wait to read more from you!!

Beautiful story.

There is definitely more to this story! Very well-written!

Loved it

Hoping that he impregnated his sister, and they continue after they get home…

Very nice. More please.

lucky guy, to have such a loving older sister.. thx for making the sister the older one.. its so rare, usually we get 95% of the time " little sister " " younger sister " and what not.. 5/5

"My parents and their two kids, my older sister Claire and I."

Seriously? How about "My parents, and my sister, Claire and I."

Fucking stupid.

10 Big Blazing Stars for writer! What a Hot Hot Hot Story. It makes a guy want to have had more with his sister as a kid. Me, my sister was younger and hated me for some reason. Her only goal in life was to snitch on me! LOL so NOTHING like that EVER happened to me. HA, Regardless, well written, hardly any errors, so NO issues. So overall, "Welldone" Thanks, for the Effort. Buster2U

Well written and well paced for the setting.

We the next chapter. What happens when they get home? Definitely a 5*

Beautiful story! Love the big sister taking the initiative.

Nice story. Could have been written a lot better, but everyone's gotta start somewhere yknow. Keep writing, I really like this story

I absolutely adore this story. It was thoughtful and well paced and definitely sexy. Speaking as a man who is in love with his sister, you got the feelings exactly right. I hope these two can find a happy ending, and maybe, since she's okay with her brother finishing inside her, a baby?

Good premise.

Sex much too automatic.

No discussion about him being a virgin?

She doesn't get him to do stuff to/with her? Why.

Three stars.

Well witten , niceiy done Thanx !

Would love more of this kinda stuff!