All Comments on 'Olivia's School Project - Pt. 02'

I really liked the first part of the story but I honestly think this whole cheating aspect in this part was incredibly weird and kind of ruined the story

Fair enough feedback. That's the direction of the storyline and I thought part 1 was needed to introduce the characters and give their backstory before they both discover this side of their sexuality. I get that this is a departure from part 1, but part 1 might actually be the story that needs more work, perhaps hinting more at this direction of cheating and exhibition

I don't even like cheating but the way you write is too good for me to care, love this series so much

I enjoyed the concept and execution. It seems like she wasn't really in in for herself, but it was a chore or talk. Would like to see more "mishaps".

She may be naive and inexperienced but surely she’s not that dumb? Off the rails a little for me but I’ll stick around for next time, tganks