All Comments on 'Omar's Odyssey Ch. 02: Origin'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story, a little grammar work is needed.

Kinda skimmed it really, a strange sequel but if you're happy as an author...

Next time on

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(PS. You, Omar, the author, didn't explode nutin in Laura's pussy since Omar, you, the author of this story, came in the condom that the author, you, Omar, was grateful DIDNT burst, yee?)

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