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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
no sun

no sun for him. no way to live. no way would my wife be in the sun without me.

when the kids grow up and leave home , I would be gone too. nice tale but a

sad tale about life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This story needs another couple of chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Anonytoo

Wow. You sure know how to add a bummer....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please

Please add a few more chapters I need to know how things turn out please write more its a good story and I want more please

BeachBum314BeachBum314about 9 years agoAuthor
There will be a part two.

I may not have it done until Saturday or Sunday but I'm writing part two now.

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