All Comments on 'On Being Pushed'

Very hot,but dropping 'slut bitch' in wasn't necessary and actually weakened it.

I completely second previous comment. Slut bitch was out of place here and weakened the scene. Otherwise, very, very arousing.

Went looking for more of your stories. That was your first. Wow. Please write more.

Many authors seem to rely of the name calling to create sexual tension. You, my dear, do an awesome job without it. And yes, lots of folks like it-but many don't. If your story is arousing without it, the yeas won't care and the nays will be profoundly happy.

Either way...write more!