All Comments on 'On Borrowed Time'

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Interesting - and while I'm not sure where it is going, I look forward to finding out!

if you honestly want to know & turn this into a series, I was confused by which character was which. Also it could be cool if it was illustrated? (I can't draw but I'm just saying stuff.)

I really hope this all ends with Adventure Girl secretly having a plan, saying screw you to Renee and kicking the bad guys’ butts, because this is just super depressing.