All Comments on 'On Cam for Mom'

3* A decent story line. Some dialog and an editor would help.

Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. This is my second story. I do wish you would have left your name to respond. I am interested in an editor would you be willing?

oh yes another chapter is needed

Maybe you could find an editor at Literotica's volunteer editor site. It may take some time before you find one responsible enough to respond, but do try. This was a good story that needed polishing. Unfortunately, some of us readers do not have enough time or experience to help out as volunteer editors. With a good editor, I am sure that any future stories with this good an idea could land in the HOT category.

I was VERY excited while reading your story. I have a stepdaughter that comes to see the wife and I once a year. She loves to tease me while we watch movies together. Once I get turned on I start playing with my wife and stepdaughter joins us...FANTASTIC reading please write some more...

What a great story. A bit slower and more detail would be nice in chapter 2!

Nice length and level of detail overall. Certainly kept me interested.

I have mY own site. Where I masturbate for my members.. I'm a big showoff. 6'7". Muscle with 9' Thick like a beerca.Mom is 5'11". And 46dd-34-48. Well Knew there was a chonce someine I know would find it.. And the lucky winner was mom. But she didn'tall me for a while. When she finally did. She was nervous. I would be upset.I promised her. It didn't bother me at all. The next time I had a show. Mom was in my room with me. Not on camera. .after I blew a load. I ended the session. But gave mom her own private show. And yes we ended up fucking

Great story and great when a couple can share esctasy with a parent. Nothing more loving than a son and mothers love. And a understanding wife who indulges them both. I was moved.