All Comments on 'On Display: A Mannequin Fetish'

Very good writing effort - loved the erotic control theme from start to finish! Hope you'll do more stories along similar lines. Regards.

As yet the story can be made more exciting, by elaborating on piercing and (ceryainly !) tattooing.

Well-constructed even though I knew what was coming. A little more detail would have helped in the story line. Your story is still a 5 Star in the end!