All Comments on 'On Her Terms Ch. 01: The Arrangement'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOVE TO-BE DALE

Great soon he will be use by both of them. Fun way to become a slut bitch. Maybe in the future Sam will have two BBC use Dale as there slut. FUN FUN FUN

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 8 years ago
Great Job!

This is a very good story so far a great combination of build up, character development and sex. I am really surprised that there are not more comments here.

Thank you for posting and please continue. It sounds like Sam has long term plans for Dale and I would love to see how this three way dynamic turns out for everyone. I like the way that you portray Sam as getting over her anger and like Dale, doing something out of her comfort zone out of love for Laura. Plus it seems like she is really warming up to Dale and Dale to her. It looks like the start of a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent, well written, realistic story!

Thank you, this is an excellent, well written, realistic story. In my personal experience a 'man hating' butch Lesbian makes the very best Humiliatrix and Dominatrix. She will alway push things a little further (pun intended).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

I loved the build up. Please continue!

theghostwritertheghostwriterover 8 years ago
Fantastic

I just love this story and cannot wait for the next installment - I just want to be Dale!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please write more

This is really arousing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
made me so hard, so hard

Such an interesting angle, made me wish i was him!

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 2 years ago

Good start to the story, though I found the portrait of Sam to be a little stereotypical. But I found it very erotic, and look forward to reading more chapters.

Client8Client8about 2 years ago

Interesting... so far, enough to chance it for ch 2

jennifurzoejennifurzoeabout 2 years ago

Such a dream and so desirous for a reality to happen,a Domineering Butch Lesbian and an ex~girlfriend making me their slave and slut,i wish upon a star..,💜

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love the story and look forward to the next chapter. The continued education of Dale As a slut because it is my fantasy to be trained as a slut for a Dominant woman or couple. It would be great to break my stapon viginity

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love the story

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