All Comments on 'On My Own Now'

I honestly started to read this through bordom and got so engrossed in it , i was hard before i even realised it was happening , well written , good story , and unusually not straight into the sex well done , if it is a true story then by sounds of things you had a good teacher, one who set you up for the rest of your life ,what a dream start for young mans life

Story was okay, but the writing was terrible.

I thought this was a good story but Monique seemed to disappear. I was expecting the protagonist to resurrect his relationship with Sara through Sara's daughter. No matter -- I enjoyed the story