All Comments on 'On Probation'

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Independent_ArticleIndependent_Articlealmost 11 years ago

I didn't know children were allowed to post stories on this board.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Weird

That's the weirdest story I ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Infantile

shite

LeanneSinclairLeanneSinclairalmost 11 years ago
Not as bad as all that ...

Nothing wrong in principle with just transcribing, unmediated, a masturbatory fantasy. In fact there's something quite intimate about it. But it didn't quite work. Could be the basis for something better.

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