All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 03'

How long are you going to tease me? My wood is getting hard. Good story.

like a good wine it takes time

Oh, yeah...this writer certainly knows how to achieve the slow build up to the Money Shot. Will there be any sex in the future...the Shadow doesn't know - but this Writer does. Still enjoyable! Well Crafted!

I am kind of interested in where this is going. I've enjoyed the read so far and I'm looking forward to the next instalments.

This is a really good story and I love Murphy. She seemed to become very forward in this chapter, more forward than earlier, but that was nice. I liked her. Nothing like a really forward slut who may be a member of AARP.

Nookiehunter

And ? What happened ? You quit in the middle. You didn't mention that there were additional chapters, which we can all anticipate