All Comments on 'On the Bus: Excuse Me'

I liked the presentation. The theme is not new however, the track of the story made it interesting. Speculation: Will she stray at 40 or so? Is this just wedding nerves or doubt that she can experience only one man?

I enjoyed the sweetness of the story, surprised and actually glad that it wasn't Erotic. It seemed exactly as it should be.

But I'm curious about it being categorized as a chain story, written as a collaboration between authors, but there's no reference to who all the authors are.

Was a not a bad story but I would suggest publishing it under nonerotic

Why is this on literotica?