All Comments on 'On the Buses'

by EnglishMuffins

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wirepullerwirepullerabout 13 years ago
excellent

really cool. nice story and writing.

STAHRHARDONESTAHRHARDONEabout 13 years ago
Loved the story

Nice fantasy you had going there, mister, well constructed, well written, good spelling and grammer. You Brits do know how to use the language, and how to write with it. I thought it was also well constructed, logical, and happened in a usual but exciting build toward the climax. If the wife weren't watching, I feel like I could jack it and cum.

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I was a forty-something red-blooded male with all the usual appetites when I started, now I've turned fifty I'm writing less and doing more I like to write stories for grown-ups, to entertain, to amuse and to get you excited If you like what you read, drop me a line to inspi...