All Comments on 'On the Line'

A plus sized lady and a hot American Indian? OMG! What a great match! The story was so well written and I enjoyed it so much. Please keep up the great work!!!

Wow! That was extremely HOT! I must stay that I love the pairing (plus size girl and Native American guy)! Love it.

I enjoyed the pairing of the plus sized woman and the hot American Indian! What a hot story! Keep up the great work!

That shit was just that damn good!

Trying to read it all so fast.

Trying to get it all in there BUT not miss anything --

is there really a CHRIS?

does he need a sex puppet?

I can arrange THAT!

damn that was fuckin' hotter than anything I have read in a good long, while.

Marinetown, USA

this needs a 200 rating - it was hot!