All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 21'

Dont really like Erin to much she seems like a prissy little bitch but everything else was great as usual

The romance between Jenny and Jeremy has been perfect. Please don't ruin it by adding more and more people into the sex and then turn this potential wonderful story into the junk/jerk sex story. If you are heading towards this direction then please categorized it as group sex NOT incest category so that we won't bother to read it at all. TQ

This is probably my favorite chapter so far. Loved the Jenny/Erin lesbian coupling, I hope it isn't the last. Also enjoyed that the chapter is from Jenny's perspective.

Interesting Jenny POV chapter longest to date this is first time we event's from her side of things it very different yet enjoyable considering most of take place from Jeremy 's pov in the previous chapters. Sometime his Mom doesn't all the answers but have some them most of time. I like to see jenny's pov again next time it was different take on things but still fun. Erin still might have more secrets than she letting on, but I can't be sure myself in this chapter we had a glimpse of it with her fetish of mom and sons or I might be reading to much into it Her sister love confession was last surprise I didn't see coming. Can't wait till next chapter

This is like a reboot of the entire story and it made it better. The POV from the son was starting to getting a little boring. Now with the mother blossoming in her sexuality, this is back to one of the greatest erotic stories ever. Well done!!!

I don't like to leave negative comments because I've tried doing some writing myself and it's damn hard. This story was an erotic, romantic work of art for first 14-15 chapters. The writer wrote some romantic scenes between the Mom and son that just seem to melt me but now, honestly I was bored half way through this last one. The intense love was gone and replaced with just lust and added partners. I read this category because I love the real romance between a mom and son and the depth of emotions it brings. So to use an old saying...this story has now jumped the shark.

I scored it 2 stars out of my disappointment for the series. My recommendation is to end this and move on to a new story line. Best of luck in the future but I'm done with this now.

I’ve liked every chapter and I liked this one. I found it sexier, more erotic than the last few. However, do do think that this story has a chance of getting “long in the tooth” and you may want to think About how do you end it - and with a happy ending. Love Jenny, Jeremy and Erin, but Jojo and Justin too. So..............

and it was great to read Jenny's POV. you should do this more often. i like the erin/jenny relationship and heading down the path to jenny/jessica. but hopefully you won't get too carried away with too many additional sex partners. and you've kept this very sexy and interesting for 21 chapters. hard to do. but many good writers on this site struggle to bring stories to a conclusion. and of course, most of us want a "Happy Ending". so hopefully you're moving the story in that direction. Its a great, clever, well written story. but.......... i don't want to see you loose interest or move on to other things and leave us readers stranded!!!

Thanks for a great story!

This chapter was one of your best. I hope to see more Jenny/Erin pairings in future chapters.

Let the dad find out...

This story continues to make my motor race! I'm not sure about Erin though, I think there is some hidden dark stuff behind her that will come out eventually unless I have gone way off track here. Time will tell though but I'm not sure I trust her. The twist that you added with Jess caught me totally by surprise as has the new twist with Jenny. I anxiously await the next chapter.

This started out at as a mom son....now she is just a round heeled slut. sorry. others might not see it this way but I do. wish you would have kept to the theme rather than have the mom start doing it without the son.

I've marathoned your entire series and I have to say, you've done a great job weaving your story together. My favorite part has to be the long term relationship between Jeremy and Jenny and the romantic love they have for each other. The sec is so hot and continues to get hotter, so I hope the trend continues. But don't stray too far from what makes your stores outstanding, the love between the mother and son. Thank you, and looking forward to the rest!

Jenny makes the whole story, she is kinda, loving, caring and very much devoted to Jeremy. But, Jeremy is simply a pussy hound he will go screw anything that moves and that is what I don't like. Now, in this episode Jenny has morphed into a common skank too. I would have hoped that the author would have kept the characters pure. But, oh well that's just my opinion.

Hi was wondering when is the next part coming ??? This is one of the best stories in here please don't stop writing

Wow...21 chapters of mind blowing sex.... Not too bad for a story that supposedly was going to end after 5 chapters.... don't know where you are going from here but I am along for the ride until the story ends.... keep up the good work

Incredible story but please, do not ruin the relationship between Jeremy and Jenny. It would be very sad if that happened. maybe you could include a mini orgy with Jenny, Jess, Erin and Jeremy. I would like to see something more anal, amazing story and characters. :)

When is Jeremy gonna do Erin mom

Too long a wait! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

How much longer for the next parts ??????

So.... is this story continuing?

Again, another writer, as so many others do on this site, turning the female character into a slut. Sad that this turned out to be just another cheap stroke story. You should have ended it before this chapter.

When is the next part of the story coming in here cause it's a good story

Sorry! Been a lot of RL going on and things moving slow on next chapter(s). This has been the toughest one to get through. Next few should come out relatively quickly after 22. Thanx for hanging in there!

How soon Is the next chapter? Like a week or like a month? Can't wait...

Next chapter is submitted

You commented "Chapter 22: Next chapter is submitted". But still it isn't available. We have waited very long for this chapter. Please upload it at your earliest. This is one of the best stories on Literotica.com in Incest genre. Please try to keep it in between Jenny & Jeremy. Although we understand your other commitments, but please keep regularly posting the next chapters. Also what is your favorite story on Literotica.com in Incest genre. Looking forward to read your amazing story.

Can't find this new chapter hope it's up soon to read

It usually takes the site three or four days to approve stories, so hopefully today or tomorrow! Thanx for your interest!

It usually takes this site about three or four days for a story to be accepted and posted. So hopefully today or tomorrow! Thanx for your interest!

Great story but Jeremy is becoming a whiny little bitch.Hope he means up in final chapters.