All Comments on 'On the Plantation Ch. 02'
by smutpen
- 11 Comments
thekiwicharmeralmost 20 years agoTop class chapters - would enjoy another chapter now we have mothers & daughters getting all those nice black machines pounding them.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoNormally I'd say 2 chapters are enough but I think this one could handle a third. There was a hint of a lesbian theme at the end of Ch 2 that would add some spice to #3, especially if all four females got involved. Don't forget the IR though, definately keep that going! lol ;)
KarenAMalmost 20 years agoThis was a delight to read. The sex scene is well written and erotic, and there's a lighthearted and humorous tone to this piece that made it all the more fun. The ending, with poor Robert's patronizing tone, was wonderful, allowing the reader to share the ladies' secret about their "gardening", as well as a laugh at the cheating men's expense.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoPlease, we must have a chapter 3 & 4...maybe a 5!!!! This is great stuff!
Anonymousover 17 years agothis was tops for me. Loving the talk of plantation's and inhibition which led to a nice and unexpected Chp.2 with the mom's joining in too. as I say kwality stuff dude, cheers
Anonymousabout 17 years agomaybe the guys could be taken by the slaves. to teach them a lesson. lol.. loved it , great work....
Anonymousabout 17 years agoLove the way how the mothers got involved and enjoyed it. Maybe their experiences could have been developed more and not end so quickly.Keep the wonderful discriptions of their enjoyment going as you have shown even in the firsts story! excellent stuff!
piano59almost 14 years agoYou should keep writing. Perhaps give each of the lovely southern belles their own chapter. Have 1 or 2 studs bang each white beauty till they scream out in absolute submission!
goolwaman17over 11 years agoSmutpen when are you going to return with Part three. Just loved it more please.
Clarissa72about 4 years agoLove it...Martha and the girl crew are the bomb! A garden really😂😂 Oh yea someone is plowing the garden or gardens😂😂 Men are so slow sometimes, they are easily fooled when they themselves are up to no good. Good story! 🤗
Anonymousabout 2 years agoOh, this is just so friggin good. The sex is hot and all, but it's the end of chapter 2 that is so amazing and awesome. Especially in the here and now of 2022. This should be required reading for all white, right-winged conservatives; we'd have to pass laws to ban book-burning tho!
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