All Comments on 'On The Rebound Ch. 03'

by LiveCat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Super

Great! feel free to continue this story! or any of your others they are all great. Your my new fav. author

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

this story is brilliant please continue it

trishsangeltrishsangelover 12 years ago

I have loved the story so far! Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yea continue

I love this story

And wanna see it continue

Please please please please........ Continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
beautiful

beautiful ending to a great story! keep up the good work.

elle_9549elle_9549over 12 years ago
Oh my god!!!

I absolutely loved the ending! I was wondering when Debs would show back up. Looks like they took care of that little problem! I think this was my favorite chapter. And I had a feeling that Chrissie's new love was a woman. How awesome! ~ L

Isadora_WinglessIsadora_Winglessover 12 years ago
Lovely romantic and very erotic.

Great read. I even found the u-haul lesbian bit realistic.

Thank you for sharing, and all the time and effort you put into your yarns.

v/r

I W

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
beautiful

I love it! What a beautifully well written story. Both romantic and realistic. It keeps getting better and better. Hope you continue with at least one more chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE IT

I felt like I was reading a NOVEL instead of a short, sex story. Please continue this! I was dying of laughter when you put that Chrissie put Debbie into the Shed. Oh my, I feel like I KNOW the characters. PLEEAASSEE continue this. If you continue this, keep Kate and Lex together. If they were to ever break up, I would be CRUSHED. Anyways, this series deserves a million stars. I LOVE IT

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love it!

and Great Finish

idrubloodidrubloodover 12 years ago
Well Done

A great finish to a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing and keep up the writing.

Hotlinda69Hotlinda69over 12 years ago
Actions

If your actions speak half as eloquently as your words, you could make a lot of women very happy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
GREAT!!!!!!! LOVE THE STORIES

ALL THREE STORIES WERE JUST GREAT AND WELL THOUGHT OUT KEEP IT GOING LOOKING FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE!!!!!!

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Great

That was agreat finish ! Hoping you write more about them.

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago
Better than I thought

Yup,That was indescribable... The wedding,and Debs locked in the shed...priceless! Great Work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Just lush! Cheers!

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
HILARIOUS!!

What a brilliant story, It held me captive throughout the chapters. I LOVED IT

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Excellent!

I, too, was wondering/expecting Debs to reappear. I honest to god, thought when Chrissie arrived dissheveled at the wedding that she had a run in with Debs.

DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
Another 5-Star!

You did it again!

All of your stories have such real characters, I'd love to see where they go from here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More power

Another five star tale. More power to your pen (computer?), Cat. A brilliant story, all three chapters, with great characters, all of them believable. The only thing I would say is ignore the readers calling for you to continue the story. A good writer (and reader) should know when you've reached exactly the right point to end a story and you've reached that point in On the Rebound. Anything further would be superfluous.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

A Rebound that led to Love. I'd say that was a winning score! I enjoyed this story immensely. The author took time to develop the characters so you had a clear sense as to who they were. And you can't help but rout for "The" couple. Well done LiveCat, now on to some of your other stories:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Loved it!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Gets better Everytime I read it!!!!

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
A wonderful love story!

So very well done! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Another fantastic story!

If they had six stars, I would have given this one that rating!!!

Please keep writing your wonderful stories!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
Another wonderful, fantastic story!

I so love this story! I have read it a few times now. I just really enjoy a true love story that has a happy ending. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Air_DryAir_Dryabout 4 years ago
More?

Yes, I loved the story and the lovely characters. Except for the psycho.

A back story of Chrissie and Sue and maybe more about them including Kate and Lex might be nice. Next I will select another of your stories. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing!!! So fucking Amazing!!!

How can you make something so magical and beautiful?! this is beyond words to describe how talented and imaginative your are!!! Shit!! The start was a bit rough meeting but it slowly develop and I love how Lex waited for the right time. Kate being clever on whom to choose from and easily move on especially when you get to know the real personality of your ex, it makes you wonder why did I spent my 6 months with this person but all is well, my babies are happy!!! And the weeding is so fucking magical and I love how Lex is a cry baby!!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Fabulous ....... An amazing fabulous fantastic story ....... Lovely written with drama and wonderful dialogues ........ Talented Artwork ..... Thank you for sharing

foxyfowlerfoxyfowlerover 2 years ago

It was fantastic story hope you can write more about these two and how many children they have so loving as a couple and hope more to come soon read this a few time you are a brilliant writer thank you. xxxx

BelindaTvDKBelindaTvDKabout 2 years ago

Damn good story...

Even had to wipe some tears too..

God.. i loved it..

Thanks..

Belinda

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Lovely.

But I wish I knew what happened to Debs to make her ... that way. I can't help but feel sorry for her. Relatively few psychopaths are born that way.

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Oh. And be VERY careful with your tags. They can easily give away the ending...

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Pretty outstanding.

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai643about 1 year ago

This entire story was brilliant!

Great characters, the villan got their comeuppance! And it ended with love and laughter all round!

What more could you ask for?

A really great story!

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great story. Teats everywhere. Did I say I loved oh ya. Nice job. Thank you.

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