All Comments on 'On the Road Adventure'

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It??? really using IT to describe someone non gendered. There is no context in any case to us IT when writing Trans Fiction. This story gets a minus 100.

A quick read - call it an intro. The "he/it" stuff makes it harder to read. You could have stuck with "he" for the intro.

I say every time I write a new story, ALL comments are appreciated, good and bad. Dawn, I'm going to have to disagree. The thought process in "It", and "he/it", was from the eyes of the trucker. Apparently, I did not succeed in that. Surely you are aware of people that think that way. If not, you are indeed luckier than most of us. Thank you for your comments.

I loved it. It is weird to read a story from the daddy’s point of view. I don’t identify with the dominant and made it a bit difficult to feel real. But it was still hot and sexy. I’d definitely keep up with it if you write more chapters

That was a hot story, and I look forward to their future adventures together. And there is a but. And it is the he/it bit. I read your comment and I know where you are coming from, as I have looked at some people and thought those questions. But after the first confusion has left me, I pick one title in my head.

Please continue the story, I want them to be very happy with each other (and a lot of dirty and clean fucking .)

The he/it didn't bother me. I just assumed it was from the trucker's perspective since it's written in the first person. Anyways, I would love to see a continuation of the story!

Nah don't worry Erica, I think most people understood that it is meant to show the trucker is not the most open minded, or even merely good, person. Though the he/it writing is awkward from a linguistic standpoint. He might be at first unsure if to refer to Leslie as a he or an it but he is unlikely to keep thinking like that all the time even inside his own head. He would go with either he or it for each particular instance, though he can mix it up, going with one or the other as he goes along.

Anyway interesting to see you write from the perspective of the man for once, so far the experiment is a success.

As an aside I hope you write a more romantic story one of these days. I'm kind of weird in that I like things to go hard in the bedroom, like really hard, but be lovey dovey the rest of the time. I also don't like cheating, sharing or group stuff in general very much. Basically I want my girl to be a one man slut ;) So having a story of yours where a young trans girl slowly awakens to her nature with a dominating but caring daddy would be juuust prefect. Think about it if the premise is appealing to you too. Who knows it might even be this story if the trucker learns to be less of an ass ;)

I am glad most of you got what I was trying to do. Trust me, it wasn't easy, as I am definitely the submissive, and HAVE felt the "he/it" vibe from people before. I believe it is essential for my story, AND, if Literotica ever publishes the second chapter, (They tend to hold my stories out about a week before publishing), You'll see a progression. One of my favorite sayings is, "The only thing worse than being talked about? Is NOT being talked about." Good or bad, I got some conversation going! Go me! :)

I have been to the truck stop. I know the aggressive, denial, lust filled man that can be found there. This of course does not seem to be your character. But a taste of that reality can a long way.