All Comments on 'On the Road Ch. 01'

Good work, but i liked your previous stories better. Very rarely do you get to see a well written story by an Indian author. Keep them coming!!

This is an incredible story, urbanslut! It's obvious that you're really enthusiastic about the subject matter, it comes through so vividly in the stories.

Please, more smelly cocks in pretty upper-caste mouths!

One last thing, I'll understand if you're more interested in your new series, but please know that lots and lots of your fans are eager for part 2 of the 50 rupee whore!

That was an amazing little story. I could almost empathize with her need for this sexual detour before her uncertain married future. A little detour does go a long way in enriching our lives..don't you agree?

Love your words..

This is nice. When is ch 2 coming ?

MAN!! your stories makes me wanna jerk off every time i read it. I am really a fan of yours, i've been visiting this site for 8 years now, but i haven't found a writer like you. Keep all those stories cumming.

Fantastic....can't wait for future chapters!!!!

Really good.. wish that there was an incident of flashing your thighs from under your knee length skirt, or of giving somebody a handjob.. but it was very nice anyway

Loved the story. Can u pls write the next installment

Hi Urbanslut,

This is a brilliant story. Its one of my all time fav stories. Can you please continue this story. I am from India and have had a few incidents like this here with my bf. Nothing went this far... but it was exhilarating nonetheless.

I urge you to please continue this story.

You can contact me at disha.always@yahoo.com

Your Fan

Disha

What a fun little ride!

pls pls pls continue d story plzzzzzzzz.....

When wil u write 2nd part????

Cant wait to read the next part. Please continue the story.

where is the second part? waiting for long time

I AM INDIAN MALE OF 45 YRS, YOU BROUGHT OUT MY FANTASY, WE TRIED DOING THIS WITH A LADY FRIEND OF MINE WHO IS KINKY TOO BUT CHICKENED OUT EVEN BEFORE FLASHING FULL OPEN TITS. STORY CAN'T BE TRUE I GUESS, BUT EVEN IF 10% OF IT IS YOUR DESIRE TO EXHIBIT IT IS JUST ABOUT FARTHEST AN INDIAN WOMEN CAN GO.

I KNOW IT IS PLAIN IMPOSSIBLE HOWEVER, IF AT ALL EXISTS A SLIGHT CHANCE, I AM

DESIRECARNAL@YAHOO.COM

I hope you will continue this story as a series. Looking forward to the next part!!!...:D

Awesome, I and my wife read it together. She wants to go on roadtrip. Would like some advice

Awesome story.... Waiting for part 2

continue this story which is left incomplete from 2009. this is one of your best stories.

It really happens. Only difference is that say 'Dave' told 'Pooja' to wear a heavy silk saree without her blouse, with just her pallu draped over her breasts.... and then 'ordered' to "correct" her pallu for strangers ;-)

When is the next part coming waiting from about 10 years

5starrs

Absolutely brilliant story. I have always found Indian women incredibly erotic and delightful and this story really hit the spot. Please, please, please write more