All Comments on 'On the Trail'

A very erotic tale with an unexpected twist at the conclusion. Extremely well written by a younger author.

thanks

Great job! Super exciting! Will there be a sequel?

Would have liked to see a bit more, but you did a great job of giving us some character and maintaining the thrill of voyeurism. I'll be looking out for more.

sort of similar situation. My wife and I were backpacking the Pacific Crest Trail, naked whenever possible, stopping to fuck whenever we had the opportunity. Not many other people on the trail, so we made lots of fuck stops. During one such stop we noticed a lone female hiker stopped about 50 meters up the trail, watching us from behind some brush. We finished, moved on, and a couple of miles later, stopped again and saw her watching us again. This time we waved to her and called to her to hike with us. Now caught, she met up with us and she continued the next few days with us. She joined us in our nudity but did not share in the fucking. My wife and I continued our fuck stops, but now "Susan" got a much closer view and took care of herself whilst watching us.