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Panting, gasping in the darkness, they each took deep breaths, and in unison unmatched both said, "I love you."

Laughing quietly they lay in each other's arms; safe, accepted, and spent; and whispered words just to hear each other's voice. Finally the passion moved them again, this time slowly, with measured moves and a determination to savor each movement. Then they slept; he wrapped protectively, possessively, around her; and she curled lovingly, possessively, on his chest.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So many errors! Please find an editor.

OlgreyfoxOlgreyfoxalmost 2 years ago

Great start!! I just hope that the next several chapters keep going towards a wonderful romantic finish for these two lovers. Fine start indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It is hard to rate an unfinished story. So far we have interesting characters being developed. Evan's father needs more filling in.

Seems wells written.

So far no wasted story lines, but that awaits the answer to Leila and the chair incident.

While waiting to see if this becomes a truly 5.0 classic Romance, I do have high hopes the author will not disappoint.

The Hoary Cleric

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

Very nice start, thanks for this! 5/5

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