All Comments on 'On Vacation - An X-Change Novella Ch. 01'

Please continue this story.

I can't wait for the rest . I love LOVE story's.

Please continue this story I love your writing.

Wow that was amazing can't wait for the next part

This is such a well written story. I look forward to seeing you continue with it! Keep up the amazing work!

The pacing is incredible, the story is believable, the characters are well written... the story deserves every bit of length and i look forward to every bit of it in the future!

Please keep the story going!

Please continue this was extremely good!

The best xchange story ever written.

Awesome, so hot.

The pacing was perfect, it is long but there's little to no filler and I was never once bored!

I think you'll get that red H x

For not jumping straight to the ‘oops - you’re pregnant so, no changing back now’ scenario. I enjoyed it. The characters seem genuine. Danny does feel a little like a plot device, just going along to advance the story. His reaction is at least as important. Would love to know what he’s thinking and feeling. Perhaps in chapter 2?

SOON? Like real soon?

Thoroughly enjoyable! Liked the pacing of the story, it flowed well and I didn't find it too long at all - as a love story, it felt right. Nice details but not too much to clutter or distract ... and the sexual content was tasteful & hot! Thank you for the excellent read!

Ended up loving it. I like reading about people who care about each other.

I didn't like the ending. As the saying goes, 'how ya gonna keep 'em down on the farm, once they've seen Paris?'

Give up beauty and multiple orgasms? No way!

Good stuff, well done. Looking forward to more.

Not really a criticism, just thought I'd mention it: there's a difference between 'affect' and 'effect'. You used it wrong in the story, but it's a very common mistake.

This is very well written, it flowed nicely and seemed to have just the right amount of detail. Thanks!

Like the story. I actually enjoyed that the story built and that they were not in each others arms after 2 paragraphs. I like the description of the uncertainty in the main character.

If s man asked me to become a female after feeding cock in my pussy, I might be a female

Well written. Thoughtful and challenging. The story leaves one with an intriguing range of possibilities. What could and will happen from here?

Write 'em just like this. Sex is great and all but i suspect you will see that many enjoy a good story right with it. Don't worry about length. You have a flair for this... please keep it up. :)

This was an amazing journey. Thanks for taking us down it. It would hard not to envision myself as Jaci!!!!!!!

Awesome, entertaining tale. Thank you very much.

Loved the story! Can’t wait to read the next one. I love fairy tale endings and even though this one doesn’t have one I’m hoping the next part corrects that little issue.

I’m a 65 year old heterosexual male but if that company existed today I wouldn’t be. Being 5’9” 165lbs and average sized I would trade all the being made fun of and cheated on in heartbeat. That’s the ending I would want for myself.

Just started chapter 2 and quit before finishing the second page. With me having the history I do I can’t stand the cheating and stuff going on with the company staff(Peter/Peri). It’s an instant turn off for me and I must admit that it brings out the anger that finding out that my first wife cheated on me multiple times and even once with my dad. Sorry but I’ll just live with the first chapter and be done.

Excellent job, well written, well edited. Long read, glad I read it. Changes some of my perspectives.

super verhaal !

Great story. I love love. But I felt so sad at the end. Until I realized I could finish the story in my head. And in the end, love prevailed.