All Comments on 'On Valentine's Day'

Would have been great after Stacy presented her ring set ... that he announced that he had a ring of his own for her ...

So much detail in just 2 pages and it flowed so well.

Loved her proposing to him.

Wow! Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment. Thank you. You made my night. Thanks.

A straightforward story well told, with convincing characters and dialogue. I look forward to reading more from you.

Could have done with checking spelling and punctuation a bit more - I thought 'Silicone Beach' was a witty comment on Californian plastic surgery until 'Briton' instead of Britain suggested it was probably just a mistake. But that's pretty easy to improve seeing as you can tell a well-paced story.

Thank you for the nice compliment. I have a confession on the typos. Not an excuse, but why they occurred on this one. I have a LD. I am slightly dyslexic and even though I have worked on that my entire life, I sometimes still jumble the letters.

My wife -- who is a wordsmith -- proofs my stories, but with this one I wanted to surprise her since it was Valentine's Day. The ending is not how we got engaged. I was the person on one knee, but how the two meet is actually how we met. Hence the surprise. Congratulations on being one of the winners.