All Comments on 'On Your Knees, Handsome'

Not just that I love her style and attention for detail, more so her realistic depiction and the genuine relationship between characters makes one immerse deeply into the story and gives one the feeling as of you're part of it.

Thank you for this contribution Pixie

My goodness, you sure got me hot with that one. Fully about the dominance/submission, but full of love at the same time. Very well done; Thank you for sharing! I hope you write more!

Alas, I don't but thanks for sharing this story so I can dream.....

A real Mistress know how to use her slave for her pleasure and the love and care for her slave.

I wish I be that slave.

Thanks Mistress

Slave Suman667

Wow! This is everything I've tried to write, only better

Very hot story, thank you for doing it. Love the detail of the build up and their relationship. And of course her thoughts during the action. It puts you in the moment.

Nice premise.

But there really wasn't enough 'foreplay' before she rode him. More teasing. Not so much of a rush to get to the end of the story.

And you need an editor/proofreader.

Three stars. Could have been much better.