All Comments on 'Once could be Considered a Mistake'

The story was fine, but you need to be less choppy in your narrative. Try doing more than just stating the facts. Compare with other writers. I think you have potential, but it just doesn't flow...

Listen to the advice to study other writers who have higher scores. Take advantage of the writer's resources section here on Lit. Good luck & happy writing!

I thought you had a very interesting take on an old theme. (Don't get insulted by my saying it's an old theme. There are no new plots, just new twist.)

I really enjoy your stories. It would be nice if you would do another part with the mother joining the father and daughter in a loving sexual relationship

Great story about them , more please on family sex

Overall the story was great and passionate. Thanks!