All Comments on 'Once It Gets Dark Ch. 08'

I would say is a small way the general does care about Anna. he is an ass though for what he is doing. I wonder what his perspective would be like. Like he cares but then he just goes back to being a jerk face then Anna sends Tim the maps damn that’s gonna be a fun convo Anna will have with the general. Either way I love this story I keep checking daily for updates I wish there was a way for notifications. Keep updating please.

Longer than most but too short by a mile! Love this story and can’t get enough. Glad I checked my phone and was surprised with another chapter! Keep them coming, you’re doing wonderfully!

Imagine posting a fantasy word glossary for disgusting rape and abuse filth. I've seen it all. This site..

OH ANNA. What have you done? I simultaneously love her for that text and dread the consequences. And yay, she is magic. When is Vo'ren going to let her get dressed, that's what I want to know. I love this series! I want more Suchil Tem/Veril politics please as well as more Anna/Vo'ren of course. Please don't rush this. Fortnightly or even monthly updates are totally understandable. Just make sure you write 100 chapters. Kidding/not kidding. Seriously put the time into writing because I reckon once you are done you can send this to a literary agent and become rich beyond your wildest dreams like the 50 shades of grey lady (but not actually like her because this is way better). Thanks so much Maria de la O. <3 <3 <3

What a wonderful present to start the day by having another chapter in this story. Anna is going to be a covertly rebellious spouse, wife, toy, it would appear. I do love it that this sis a story with erotica. Classic erotica is only incidentally sexy. Anyone can write a scene about people screwing. I am hooked by the story and as such five stars seems like a meager reimbursement for the extensive work and skill required for what you have given us.

I would guess we have a fair way to go in this relationship. So looking forward to how it evolves.

Wow that was intense and so many things we don’t know somehow I think the General might be several steps ahead of Anna. Great chapter.

The lord thickeeennssss, love the pacing, and go Anna!! These Little moments of rebellion that can’t possibly come back to haunt her… ooo so juicy

This story is amazing, never stop writing x

This was delicious, can’t wait for part 9. I can’t help but feeling, after what Ren said about having and excuse to fight the rebellion that Anna giving this information to Tim is just going to gift the general what he really wants.

This is absolutely amazing. I’ve been giddily waiting for this chapter. It’s even better than I had dreamed of. I read it in one go this morning and I can not wait for more.

Amazing story as always, surprised I don't have to pay for it lol.

I kinda of hate him as a characters like what is he doing!!! I think I would like to see his POV as I love the storyline.

I actually screamed when I saw a new chapter. Cheers to you, the most talented writer I’ve ever seen on this site. We are so lucky you continue to post chapters for this insanely addicting story!! Can’t WAIT for the next one.

So amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter.. I hope they learn to love each other and give into their natural chemistry.

Ahhhhhh SO good!

So good! Loving this story. The characters and plot are so compelling.

Bro, you are so talented for real. I would buy this if it were a book.

Oh sweet Jesus I finished this chapter the minute it posted and can’t wait for the next one!

Thank you so much♥️♥️♥️

Loved it … completely worth the wait.

Argh, another cliffhanger! This one left me with a pit in my stomach, and not in a fun way, because I’m certain she’s going to end up regretting her impulse. Though, really, he needs to get his handsome green head out of his elven backside and start treating her like more than a pet. :) You are so talented and I’m completely sucked into the world you’ve created!

The general said he would do anything to protect Anna but does he realize that includes himself. Also I’m curious that for the magic binding to work I wonder if she is preggo rn and not even know it. Or maybe she does have magic of

somekind.

Can the general hear her thoughts in some way because of the marks

Absolutely loving that ‘angelrider’ got through 8 chapters of ‘filth’ before posting in protest

I was so happy when I saw you posted today! Great writing, the cliffhanger left me speechless. And don't listen to the haters, I'm still trying to understand how they end up in the non-consent section, and then clutch their pearls at the content. Keep up the good work, I love Anna's strong personality. Hope you post again soon!

Oh wow so delighted to see this today

I am absolutely hooked

Thank you Maria

This one made me feel so bad for Anna :( I wish he was a bit kinder (i know that’s not the point but yk)

Another amazing chapter, I’ve shared this link on other platforms is that good. You are an amazing write and have me hooked. Keep doing exactly what your doing.

Another fantastic chapter. I’m wondering if the darkness unlocked during the binding ceremony has something to do with the curse. Maybe with it released, she’s broken it? I was on pins-and-needles waiting for this chapter, but I’m enjoying the story so much that I’d rather you slow down and post less frequently than get burned out. I hope it goes on for a long, long time!

So good forever begging you don’t abandon us this is a masterpiece

This story has me in a CHOKE HOLD. Omg PLEASE post the next chapter soon!! This should be a novel! It’s the best story I’ve ever read on here. In fact, it’s some of the best characters and plot I’ve ever read PERIOD.

Wow, amazing... Can't wait for more!!!

I was a little disappointed the whole time Anna could have been plotting with Tim (he could maybe tell her he has more resources at his command than she thinks) to escape or set up a spy connection for the human rebellion, she spent it sleeping.

What if Anna has magic because one of her ancestors is either Veril or a being from another of the German tales? That would be quite the reveal. Waiting with bated breath for more! Perhaps in a coming chapter she can learn about his body more, perform felatio at his command?

Wonderful installment! I'm glad Anna didn't scream but passed out instead during the binding. Intriguing bit with her having some kind of magic. I look forward to finding out how that plays out. As well as learning more about the curse.

It's easy to see that there will be some sort of repercussions with her sending Tim the picture. I almost dread finding out how serious it could be. Especially since I have a sense that Tim's with the resistance...

It's evident that Vo'ren cares for Anna in his actions just as much as it is that he does have a temper and either doesn't know how or is afraid to show Anna that he cares. He's so conditioned to being in charge and in control that it most likely will be a struggle.

I also enjoy how complex Anna is with her struggles between her attraction, anger, resentment, resistance, fear, and occasional terror even, as well as the confusion they're causing her. I'm glad she is able to realize when she's most likely pushed too far and try for more middle ground. Although I'm not so sure how the two of them will handle more of her hormone induced mood swings which at some point will be coming, I'm sure.

Basically I love this story you're creating and hope you can continue with it for a very long time! (100+ episodes or more please)

As many commenters have stated, this story keeps developing amazingly and I am also in its chokehold and at its mercy 🤣 You’re so incredibly talented, take all the time you need! I’d like to think that Vo’Ren isn’t ignorant to the fact Anna still has her phone and has his suspicions about Tim and his connection to the rebellion. Despite his addiction to Anna, I doubt the great butcher would leave important documents so easily accessible to her, unless by this point he is aware of her communication with Tim and knows how stubborn and determined she is, hoped in the heat of her emotions would help set up a sting of sorts using the available documents - that she can’t even interpret yet. The intimacy between them keeps getting hotter and hotter, you could really feel her torment. The overwhelming conflict between her desire and attraction to him, that feels so natural to her even in the space of her rightful anger towards him. I can’t wait to see the journey you take us on with their magic and hope we get a Vo’Ren POV soon! Would love to see you get a chance to publish this!! Keep up the amazing work!

This was definitely worth the long wait. Cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Completely unrelated, but I don't think Anna has used the restroom in like 5 days at this point. Like not even mentioned having the urge. She's either been with Vo'ren or stuck in his tent this entire time. Not calling it a plot hole, and not saying you need to address it, but it's a weird detail that I need to know; how do Elves' bathrooms work? Is Anna going to be able to wash herself at some point? She must be so crusty after 5 days of not washing.

Hi everybody thank you so very much for your comments!

I really love reading all your thoughts!

I will probably take a little longer for Chapter 9 because I am currently traveling in Scotland with my best friend (yay!) and don’t know how much writing I will be able to do. Just to give you a heads up

I love this story & can not wait to see how it develops. Vo'ren does not know what is coming- at the moment he has all the power, he is used to being in control, struggles to let his feelings show. Anna meanwhile is just learning to harness her power & is starting to realise how she can fight back with emotions... especially now she can feel it through the markings..

The binding is only one way, but will vo' ren feel her pain? He will face a terrible conflict when Anna's map incident is revealed. Maybe he has set her up, he wants to destroy her human world- .but will he be able to take the pain of seeing her crushed - we all know that, no physical pain can come close to emotional anguish, especially when the people we love are hurting. I am hoping we hear more of Anna standing up for herself.& fighting back. Anna is clearly drawn to him but is it lust or love? I love reading about her conflicting thoughts on this. I also hope we hear more about the curse. & of Anna's magic... are the two linked? Was there a significance to the "dark tendrils seeoing out".. Vo'ren thinks he can control Anna through the binding... but does it feed her power everytime he does this- I hope we see more of her new found powers. At some point the lack of hygiene is going to cause Anna to become ill- either rashes, or worse. Like others I am longing to hear Vo'rens inner thoughts - what he really thinks of Anna & perhaps his helplessness to support her either through her pregnancy or coming to terms with her loss.. I know this is literotica, but the sex is just incidental to the story. You are very talented. Xxx

This is an insanely well done piece of work. The increasing tensions pay off like waves reaching their crest as they press up against the shore. I love this story.

Agreed! Loving everything about this story, but have also been super curious about the bathroom situation/her being able to take care of her hygiene. I imagine she is incredibly filthy despite that quick bucket wash.

I've been thinking about this latest chapter for awhile since I've read it. Absolutely epic... I'm curious is the general power one that allows him to control people rage. Did he manipulate the counselors rage too or was that all the counselors own emotion?

I love your work I'm very grateful to you for sharing it with us

I love this story! It was enough steaminess and political intrigue to keep me interested. I want to know so many things! Will Anna meet the first human women who were given to the Veril? Will we get a POV of Voren? Also will poor Anna get a shower and new change of clothes? Poor thing!

I can’t wait to see what else you’ll write!

We know Vo’ren stated he had scented Anna a month prior to him acting on it and taking her. Is it possible that he had already been scouting her building due to him and his army investigating the possibility of a rebellion? Was Tim already a suspect being cased and that’s how he found/scented his mate?

It’s very good. Much better written than first few. They feel more real and true to character.. of course she doesnt want him angry.. he’s damn scary! And i like that you are showing and not telling. I am intrigued about their connection and why they are so attracted to each other and how their characters will develop.

Ps-the map betrayal makes me worried for her!

‘Hands and knees’… her reaction is endearing. After all, she is new to sex and there is a sweetness about her. I cant imagine him liking that he is softer with her.

Hehehehe I’m reading this on my birthday and it’s the 13th and she’s the 13th women omg it’s fait hehehe I spent my birthday alone but I’m not truly alone I wanna know what mystery’s will i uncover reading this it’s making my heart thump with joy and happiness I hate my life but this this is worth living for this masterpiece I need more I must finish this story before I meet my end I love you! 🎂

*Anglerider* imagine posting about this (her on the 8th chapter) either she or he really enjoys the story to read allll the way here or she didn’t brother starting at chapter one she or he doesn’t truly understand or know the love and care they have for eachother (even if he’s a little harsh on her) she doesn’t say she doesn’t enjoy it she admits she dose even with no venom and is it really kidnapping if she literally walked out herself don’t listen to those bad comments we all love you

Ahh I completely agree with the theory that Vo’Ren was always onto Tim and has set Anna up here. What a bastard. So his sparing Tim in the apartment was not such a merciful gesture. If this is right something is going to need to shift in his attitude or Anna will just end up hating him, with good reason. But surely something will come of those tendrils of darkness spreading out within her during the binding ceremony… I am invested!

So if there are no Veril younger women and Voren wasn’t interested in mixing with human women before, how is he experienced with sex and how does he know what he’s doing?

Would love a POV from Vo’Ren or when he does speak Veril and she doesn’t understand we get a translation. Dying to know what he is saying.

This series is incredible!! Your writing is fantastic, I’m so hooked. I’d legit consider looking into getting this published on more sites or even making this into a novel!

I desperately want to know how Voren got his sexual experience! How!

Hi everybody! Thank you guys so much for all your thoughts and comments. Wow! <3

I am back from my vacations and currently working on Chapter 9, but it will still take a little bit until I can publish—at least a week from now, possibly more.

Also, if there are no Veril women about where do young veil come from, like the translator?! So invested in this story now I need to know!

I think, in the absence of young women, it's acceptable in Veril society for men to have gay sex. That experience translates over to the human women. That is the only scenario that kind of makes sense unless Vo'ren is just so old that he grew up in the same generation as when the last baby girls were being born. Like there are Veril women his age (doesn't seem likely).

I just want to know how the stinger and the venom could affect the growing child. Does it endanger them or does the venom strengthen the child's magic?

I have never commented here even though I’ve been reading Literotica stories for years and years. This is the first one ever that I want to have the whole book of. The story is amazing, your writing works so well that I couldn’t stop reading, blew through all 8 chapters in a row. I so want to know how this whole story and world turn out.

Thank you for writing this!

This is such a fantastic story . I can’t wait for chapter 9 .

I would like to know a little more about what Anna looks like .

Currently I have started at the beginning and am reading my way thru again .

LOVE this, read all the chapters in a day I was so hooked. Like many have already said, what a great story and fun characters, the erotica is just a bonus. This is the best story I've read on this site in a long time! Cannot wait until the next chapter!

(Besides, I am used to it; after all, Germany is not the first country I have conquered." )

So with the lack of veril women is it the conquered counties spoken about in a previous chapter how Vo’ren has gotten his sexual experience? Before the translator stop was he saying his soldiers were being used? I’m guessing to bred and break the curse with other races?

Sigh. She insists she won't give herself willingly and then immediately begins complying with his orders. Why are people afraid to actually write forced sex sometimes.

I am floored - read all 8 stories in one go last night. The writing, the world building, pretty damn good!! If you have a good story arc (it's tough to nail an ending) I'd say try to get this published.

Well written and engaging.

It would be great if the description of each chapter weren't the same, but rather included an actual short summary of what to expect.

@bellamie1235. I disagree. Plenty of authors write pure rape. This story is about the complex push and pull between two people with a deep, immediate connection whom life has cast as enemies.

Well . I have just read this all the way through for the third time .

Longing for chapter nine ; the best story I have ever read on this site. Definitely get this published .

Well done . Great writing.

This is so good. I can't stop thinking about it. If you turned it into books I would buy it.

Hello, my dears! 

I am working on the final touches of Chapter 9 right now, and I think if everything goes well, I will be able to submit it this weekend. 

Thank you all so much for your patience and your encouragement!

Outstanding!! I love it so much!

Fully invested in the story. Excellent writing. Chapter 9 pls.

chapter 9 soon pls been waiting since Friday!

I keep checking for chapter 9 i’m so excited

Glad to see I’m not the only one constantly checking in for chapter 9 ;)

I've been wondering what would happen if Anna tried to physically cut the bonding mark from her wrist. Would it even be possible or would the magic stop her? Would it cause her darkness to come back?

If you publish, I would love to buy it! Thank you for sharing your work with us. I’m excited for more.

Hi, I have just submitted Chapter 9, so hopefully it will be online soon. Thank you for the tip of putting the vocabulary and updates in the profile; I will be doing that from now on.

Many hugs to all of you!

I’m loving this story so much! I’d happily buy this as a published book, it deserves so much recognition 🖤

The wait is killing me! I check first thing in the morning and every night just in case!!!

Checking for upload a couple times a day lol

Love this story. I have since questions I'm going to have answers to....

1. Ch'ish means what, specifically? I need to knowwwww. Lol.

2. The Verin weren't going to try to survive until the Germans attacked and the Verin conquering them gave them an opportunity to create the breeding treaty? Why the fuck not? What's really going on here?

3. Why did the Germans bomb their forests and where were these forests? Did it all take place on Earth or partly in the other realm and how are they connected? How did humans became aware of the Verin/why did the Verin reveal themselves?

4. Why do they not have a problem with English and only hate the Germans? Do they generally like humans?

5. Why hasn't the international community intervened for the German women? This is pretty much like humans being cool with our species becoming sex slaves to aliens, but just because it's one ethnicity that attacked them. Are the Verin feared beyond Germany?

6. Didn't the roommate think to go to the domestic intelligence community? The police might blow him off but they wouldn't. The roommate seems suspicious to me.

7. Can she charge that phone somehow and get more information on the Verin language? Download an AI program to translate Verin for her?

8. Did Ren lose family in the attack?

Can't wait to see what's going on with the binding, curse on the Verin, and the human statue. The Verin political intrigue is interesting too.

Oh thank you for the recent update. I was starting to get impatient 😅 looking so much forward to reading more of this. And truly hoping for many more chapters. Perhaps even a book 📖