All Comments on 'Once Upon a Starry Night'

Whimsical, yet naughty! Nicely written...would love to find out where the two of them go. I hear elves are well built.....

From the 'wayward' spelling and word choices I wonder if the writer was in the state in which the main character was described - p*ssed!!

"Time immemorial" means "forever", not "in memorial".

I definitely thought the idea had some promise, but it seems more like a cigarette ad than erotica?