All Comments on 'One Day in a Taboo Family'

by storyteller1999

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice idea

I enjoyed your premise very much, but the grammatical errors make your story difficult to read. If English isn't your primary language may I suggest you find someone who can edit your work. Your writing will be more interesting as you improve.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
Hayley, Ana and Rachel all my favorites

So is this story.

ThePonderingLizardThePonderingLizardabout 3 years ago

Absolutely fucking loved this. Three hot sluts getting what they need. Can't wait to see Hayley get milked like Rachel in the next chapter. And more anal scenes please!!! God I want Ana to take it so deep up her perfect little butt

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good idea posting as "Incest" & not "Fanfic/Celebrity".

Bad idea posting in the tale's description that it included actually-named celebrities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"in the evening or in the night"?! THIS is crap or it's trash or garbage 🗑️!

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