All Comments on 'One Fateful Night'

Loved every word. It was the little touches like her not swallllowing and flushing the condom that makes it so easy to believe. You have a real gift. I hope you keep writing. And if you ever need or want an editor I would be gratefull if you consider me.

really appreciate the feedback

great story

That was well written. The dialogue was believable and well constructed. I was really invested in Julien and Anna by the end of it. I don't know if you intend this to be a stand alone story (I anticipate by the title it might work best as such), but you should keep writing.

Well done, indeed! You have sequels that have earned high ratings. Please give us sequels!

A great story but got a bit put off by the fact that the morning after she was drunk julians name changed to jacob twice before returning to julian again

the character name in the previous story i wrote (new neighbour ch 2) was named jacob. i guess the names were too similar and i messed up a couple times. Should have caught it in the readthroughs

No trauma, no drama, no cheating. I was quite pleased and will read your other stories but skip any BDSM. Light and friendly bondage is OK with me but no rough stuff or pain. I am too old to change my likes and dislikes.

Spoiled by the condom bareback is the only way

That was good mutual loving, more realistic characters and plausible scenario.